Part 1:
A function was going on at Blackcrag Fortress. They were giving away weapons at a cheap price. A Empire Dervish named Max was really itching to get a brand new greatsword, his stupid rapier isn't even doing damage anymore. When he heard about the sale, he told his friend George about it. "I really want a new Steel Greatsword." He told him. "Well, that's good." George replied. Then all of sudden a alarm goes off! Blackcrag Fortress is under attack. Empress Prazac when out of her throne room and she motions to some of her troops to fight these attackers. She was also motioning for Max to come over, but what can he do with a broken rapier! He stepped over to another soldier that was off duty and said to him, "Can I borrow your broadsword?" Max asked him. The soldier said, "What? You need to use my broadsword? Why?" Max shook his head and said, "My rapier is old and broken. I cannot fight with this old rapier." "Well okay." The soldier says. Then he hands Max is nice looking Iron Broadsword. "When you are done using it, please return it to me. I'm going to need it." The soldier then said. "Okay, I promise to return it." Max agreed. Then he threw his broken iron rapier into a potted plant nearby and he ran to the southern entrance of the fortress, the soldier’s broadsword in hand. It seems like the soldiers here are beating the attackers. And they do. Just with a few hits out of the broadsword. Then the soldiers went back to whatever they were doing before. Max walks back to his quarters. But he is forgetting something, isn't he????
Part 2:
Max decided to take a nap in is quarters for a few hours, and then later, he woke up with a knock on the door. It was that soldier that he borrowed the broadsword from. He said, "I'm almost done with my break, you need to give me back my broadsword now." Max stared at him, and then the broadsword, then with a sigh, he gave the broadsword to the soldier. "Thanks." The soldier said. Then he walked away. Max took a look in his dresser; he finds his old, broken rapier sitting there. Then he said, "Boy, I sure hope that weapon sale gets here soon." But lucky for him, just as he was sitting there whining, the weapon merchants got to Blackcrag Fortress. Max poked his head out the door and saw that the merchants were here!
"They're here!" Max yelled and then ran out of his quarters and when over to the merchant salesman. But then he saw a very long line. It looks like everyone needs a new weapon, Max thought to himself. He told the soldier that was standing in front of him on the line, "I want to get a new greatsword." "That's great." The soldier said, in annoyed sort of tone. But then the line began moving, and then finally, Max was next. He stepped up to the counter and said to the merchant, "Can I have a Steel Greatsword please?" "Sure." The merchant said, and then when over to a nearby chest and he took out a brand new Steel Greatsword." The merchant gave Max the greatsword and then he said, "That will be 850 gold." Max put hand in his pocket and took out 100 gold pieces, then he took out another 100 gold pieces, and he did that until he had 900 gold. He took 50 gold back and the merchant took the gold. "It’s a pleasure doing business with you." The merchant says as he piles up the gold. Then Max looked at his new Steel Greatsword. "Great." Max whispered.
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